You See

“You See”

You see every pebble that falls from a mountain, and every snowflake that blankets the quiet forests.

You see every leaf that falls, every rain drop, every flower that blooms.

You see every tree rise, every piece of grass that takes its place, and weed hidden deep within bristle.

You see every caves deepest secrets, every creature unknown to man in the seas, swamps and desert.

You see every cloud lose its shape to form a new, and every gust of wind that blows in all direction.

You see every wave that crashes, every bubble that forms from the breath of your mammals.

You see every insect, every parasite and everything that is invisible to man’s naked eye.

You see every vine that reaches for the sky, every pebble and roots that bury themselves deep within your earth.

You see all of your creations, creatures and the heart motivations of man; NOTHING is hidden from the eye of our creator!

– Jackie 2010

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5 thoughts on “You See

  1. michelle

    Jackie, that is beautiful!!! I wish I could write poems…
    It’s truly amazing that God sees everything at once… and it’s comforting.
    I look forward to reading more of your poems Sis. ( :

  2. michelle

    I hope you post more! (( :

  3. aw thanks, my poetry remind me of a childs writing, i have lots of em but trying to get the courage to post them. Thank you for your encouragement sis. HUG

  4. brokenathisfeet

    Jackie this poem is lovely. It’s not childish one bit. The imagery is beautiful. I can’t wait to read more of your poems.

  5. brokenathisfeet

    This is lovely Jackie. Not childish one bit. Beautiful imagery. I want to read more.

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